Hi hi! This is a very lovely entry, but needs a bit more focus on the home, the actual interior of the place, before we can roll it! Interspersing thoughts and details on the feel of the home, what it evokes as opposed to just how it looks, or even some more comparison and contrast to Nikos' own previous room would be great!
Once that's done, go ahead and reply to my comment and we'll get this rolled~!
It may have been small, somewhat rough around the edges and certainly not as extravagant as he was used to, but Asthenikós couldn't help thinking that Faolan's home was as warm as and kind as he was. As he shifted, adjusting the blankets around him, the shine from a little crystal caught his eye....
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Comment by Kelhdare on August 31, 2024, 11:49 pm
Rexal 1: Astenikós
Rexal 2: Faolan
Entry: Link
Oh god oh no I'm not a writer please forgive me oTL
Comment by Lim on September 23, 2024, 8:16 pm
Hi hi! This is a very lovely entry, but needs a bit more focus on the home, the actual interior of the place, before we can roll it! Interspersing thoughts and details on the feel of the home, what it evokes as opposed to just how it looks, or even some more comparison and contrast to Nikos' own previous room would be great!
Once that's done, go ahead and reply to my comment and we'll get this rolled~!
Comment by Kelhdare on September 24, 2024, 1:27 am
Fixed! Thank you again weeps
Comment by Lim on October 3, 2024, 5:04 pm
It may have been small, somewhat rough around the edges and certainly not as extravagant as he was used to, but Asthenikós couldn't help thinking that Faolan's home was as warm as and kind as he was. As he shifted, adjusting the blankets around him, the shine from a little crystal caught his eye....
You have earned the Shared Tea Achievement and a Common Crystal Shard Deposit!
Your common crystal shard can be randomly rolled with the "Use" button.