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  • I understand that this is beta. Things may change in the middle of the breeding season, and/or if things will break, it will get put on hold until it is fixed. I read the disclaimer above and agree to all: Yes
  • Rexalia Username: JayTheBird and Temmie
  • Rexal 1: Sundrift
  • [ Slot Link: LINK
  • Rexal 2: Varrezah
  • [ Slot Link: LINK ]

 

  • Items to be used: Love Stew (Temmie's Inventory)
  • POTL specifications: POTL to JayTheBird
  • Courtship submission?: Grave Identity Mistake (Ghosting You) - Courtship
  • Tagging: @JayTheBird, @Temmie (Maybe @SpaciousRooms, because the slot doesn't specify either way)

C508 Sundrift x C613 Varrezah #1.)
Coat Type: Furred
ink/prs
Ink with Pursuit
Magic: #9C6EF7



C508 Sundrift x C613 Varrezah #2.)
Coat Type: Armored
gls/prs/dr/lmia
Seaglass with Pursuit, Drape
Lamia
Magic: #996EF7



C508 Sundrift x C613 Varrezah #3.)
Coat Type: Armored
str/dr/sbl
Starshine with Drape, Sable
Magic: #6ED1F7



C508 Sundrift x C613 Varrezah #4.)
Coat Type: Furred
ink/dr/lmia
Ink with Drape
Lamia
Magic: #F7896E

 

Please respond with your POTL!

Hey there! I absolutely loved reading this courtship, the atmosphere and dialogue was great! Unfortunately, Sundrift and Varrezah are not quite interacting enough in this piece for me to roll it for this breeding. Please add just a bit more interaction focusing on these two. Once that is done, you can respond to this comment and I can roll the breeding!

Added a little over two hundred words, now featuring some more dialogue sections! Let me know if the piece works now.