Hey there! I absolutely loved reading this courtship, the atmosphere and dialogue was great! Unfortunately, Sundrift and Varrezah are not quite interacting enough in this piece for me to roll it for this breeding. Please add just a bit more interaction focusing on these two. Once that is done, you can respond to this comment and I can roll the breeding!
Comment by Tosh on March 2, 2024, 10:15 pm
Hey there! I absolutely loved reading this courtship, the atmosphere and dialogue was great! Unfortunately, Sundrift and Varrezah are not quite interacting enough in this piece for me to roll it for this breeding. Please add just a bit more interaction focusing on these two. Once that is done, you can respond to this comment and I can roll the breeding!
Comment by JayTheBird on March 3, 2024, 11:34 am
Added a little over two hundred words, now featuring some more dialogue sections! Let me know if the piece works now.